Nov 7, 2023

Tips from the Writing Center: Emails

Professional emails can be difficult to write.

Last week, a friend of mine sent an email to an administrator of a university: “Greetings, Mr. Smith.” The reply was received quickly, “I am Ms. Smith; more importantly, I am Dr. Smith.” His request for an interview was turned down.

The 10 rules of writing professional emails are as follows:

  1. Use bulleted or numbered lists when possible.
  2. Make the subject line informative. The subject line should make the reader want to read the email.
  3. Any dates that are written must include the year. January 9, 2024, not 1/9.
  4. Use specific salutations. Be aware of the audience. If you have never met the person face to face, use formal greetings: Greetings, Dr., Ms., or Mr.
  5. Use short paragraphs. No more than 4-6 lines per paragraph.
  6. Make sure the email contains all the necessary information, especially the next steps.
  7. Use upper and lower case, and for the sake of all things professional, capitalize proper nouns and correctly use commas throughout the email.
  8. Use a closing (valediction). My favorite is “cordially.”
  9. Always include your name and contact information in the email signature.
  10. READ THE EMAIL PRIOR TO HITTING SEND. Read that again.

Professional people write professionally. Remember, any email sent using neomed.edu is a professional email and should be written as such.